Lonely Places -- Chapter 16
At ten o'clock, Jarrod had been puzzled; at ten after, he had been mildly concerned; and now, at half-past, he was worried. He had already walked to The Cattlemen's. The desk clerk had not seen Heath...
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And the guessing and head scratching continues! I am beginning to think that we will never know what drove Heath away and he'll just walk away from the family and never be seen again and the readers...
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I think you can get in big trouble for slowly torturing your readers! Do we need to assemble the posse?So Jarrod wasn't home when whatever happened, happened. Can he be the one to reach Heath now? I...
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I loved Jarrod sticking in lines of poetry to amuse himself, and I thought this was fabulous description, helping me see the images in my mind:Heath managed a nod but remained silent. His posture,...
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We're REALLY going to find out??? WHEN?! I'm going CRAZY not knowing the horrible incident that ripped Heath from his family! I did have to laugh at the part where Jarrod said he was inserting lines...
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Jarrod studied his brother's face. There was a look no, a disquiet in Heath's eyes which had not been there yesterday. Something had served to unsettle the glacial calm Jarrod had seen first at...
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Oh, now that they're actually getting close to it, it hurts my heart : "Then we'll be done?"Jarrod nodded reluctantly. "Yes, we'll be finished." His heart ached merely saying the word. He could not...
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Quote:"Jarrod, you weren't there. I was pretty much standin' alone."Jarrod fought back the urge to defend his family. This was not the time, not when Heath was finally talking to him. "You wouldn't...
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At last, I hope, the confrontation between the brothers...yes?!!! Jarrod has tried his way for sometime, Victoria and Audra didn't get anywhere, but Silas did start breaking down that armour...will...
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Can Jarrod and Nick break down the barrier and finally find out what happened?? I sure hope so!
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Splendid writing! It seems as though matters are coming to a head now and I am agog to learn what prompted this situation.
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I thought for a moment Jarrod might get Heath to talk and we would find out what happened but I should have known it was just a tease.Great chapter, hurry back with the answer to the question we all...
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Wonderful chapter. It seems that Jarrod and Nick's plan may be starting to work. Heath's armor is cracking. Now will it shatter and free him or will he mortar the cracks and keep his distance?Now just...
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Well I hope so Jarrod becasue I sure want to know what is the deepest root of this problem and what Nick and the others did that devistated Heath.
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OMG!!!!!!! Are we EVER going to find out what happened??!! And will Heath come back to the family? Please, please, pleeeease !!!!!!!
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Excellent story, but you're driving me crazy! (not that I have far to go) WHAT CAUSED HEATH TO LEAVE??? Keep up the great work!Lisa
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Pan, Im still closely following this story and loving every bit of it. Your writing is so well thought out and so poignant that it really does squeeze the heart. You step in and out of the characters...
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I loved the way you probed the relationship, past and present, between Jarrod and Heath in this chapter. It's not as often explored as either of the other two pairings, but it's intriguing. Jarrod's...
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Well, a step closer, I guess. Something happened, while JArrod was out of town, that Audra thinks is her fault, that has to do with something Nick said while drunk. It must have been a doozy to send...
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Like everyone else I have racked my brain trying to come up with circumstances that led to the rift. After conjuring up a range of potential scenarios, I finally gave up. I am amazed how much you have...
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Pan:First of all, I truly apologize for not replying to the last few chapters - I read them, and I can't believe as I looked back that I haven't told you how much I'm enjoying not only your story, but...
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